The Church Building as Sacred Place by Duncan G. Stroik

The Church Building as a Sacred Place: Beauty, Transcendence, and the EternalThe Church Building as a Sacred Place: Beauty, Transcendence, and the Eternal by Duncan G. Stroik

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Maybe it’s because I’m a convert from complete secularism. I just don’t see what’s supposed to be so great about the new-fangled churches that look like cracker boxes. Or like space ships. Or like a crumpled up piece of paper.

Let’s just say it here and name the elephant in the room.

What is so great about an ugly church?

One of the things I did understand, whether secular or Catholic, was that our surroundings influence how we think and feel and act. And the point of a beautiful church is to help lift our souls to the point where that curtain between us and God might, just might, be opened for a moment of personal connection.

That was highlighted for me when I was in Notre-Dame Basilica of Montreal. A young man in his early 20s was standing in the middle of the main aisle with tears running down his cheeks. His companion, a young woman, turned to him in alarm, “What’s wrong.” He suddenly looked slightly embarrassed, “Nothing. I’m just having a moment. I mean…” and he waved a hand around, “…all this just got to me.”

Precisely.

A transcendent moment of connection with the Almighty facilitated by a sacred place.

That is what this collection of essays by architect Duncan G. Stroik is all about, the importance of letting beauty flower in our sacred spaces, in our churches.

The architecture of the sacred presents Christianity in a three-dimensional form: visually, tactilely, and sonorously in time. The sacred must come to us through all the senses, to surround us with intimations of what Abraham felt in front of the burning bush, King David in front of the ark, Mary with the angel Gabriel, and the disciples at the feet of Jesus and at the foot of his cross. The stone underfoot, the wood of our seats, the smells of incense and of beeswax, the smoothness of marble, the strength of the cast iron grillwork and rails, and the paint on the canvas—all help to create a sense of the sacred and prepare us for the taste of sacred bread and wine.

Stroik discusses the history of church architecture, the importance of various design principles including the altar as center of the church, and the result of modern thinking on church architecture. This modern thinking he decries, by the way, is not only the effect of Modernism style in architectural philosophy, but also the tendency to have gift shops, ask admission fees in famous churches, and to think in terms of auditorium features (“Can you hear me now?”).

The essays are accompanied with photography of many gorgeous churches, both old and new, as well as some that makes one want to weep for those condemned to worship in such stark, ugly surroundings.

However, Stroik doesn’t just discuss the failures in vision. He holds out hope for future church building and renovation. I found Ten Myths of Contemporary Sacred Architecture to be particularly eye opening on this front. By presenting what conventional wisdom as myths and showing where they go wrong, Stroik shows how consideration and care can easily restore beauty as a desirable feature for church architecture.

Obviously, I already was disposed to agree with Duncan Stroik’s essays. However, it was a pleasure to see what I felt fleshed out in these essays and photographs. I am not the author’s intended audience but the essays were easy to understand and I actually enjoyed them. There is a bit of repetition since some of them originally went to a variety of publications, but I found that all to the good in thoroughly grasping the main points.

I highly recommend this book to anyone interested in this subject at all and particularly to anyone at all involved in Catholic church design, renovation, and building.

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Where Pentecost Began

Behold…………

Child who said yes,

 dialogued with angels and saw Magi kneel.

Traveler to a strange land.

Teacher of God.

Searcher for the lost.

First hand observer of the new heaven.

Witness in the crowd and

one of few on the hill.

She who knew unspeakable grief

Forgiver of the cowards.

Courage in the “room”.

First receiver of the Spirit,

fully human just like us!

……your Mother

Ave!

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Becoming a Great Godparent: Everything a Catholic Needs to Know

Becoming a Great Godparent: Everything a Catholic Needs to KnowBecoming a Great Godparent: Everything a Catholic Needs to Know by Paraclete Press

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

“I do have one godparent who has really been supportive of me my whole life. She has pushed me to become a better version of myself, and has supported me in the difficult decisions I’ve had to make. She treats me like I know she would treat her own kids.”

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“Sadly, none of my godparents have really had an impact on my life. Two of them were involved with me early on, but I haven’t spoken to them for years. The other two haven’t really had an influence on my life at all.”

These are among the responses from teenagers about their godparents which begin Becoming a Great Godparent. For me they are the whole point of this book and the reason both my husband and I read it with such interest. I long to be the first sort of godparent and have a terrible dread I will end up as the last sort. Certainly I am haunted by that last statement which drifts through my mind when I ponder how to be involved with our new godchild, Magdalena.

This handy little book is easy, quick read and offers excellent, simple advice for those who have been honored by being asked to help with a child’s spiritual formation. It tells what godparents should do, gives ideas on how to stay close, has a very brief history, and answers commonly asked questions.

In short, this book is just what a new godparent needs to help them get off on the right foot and stay the course. Highly recommended.

Note: I received a review copy from the publisher. Would’ve loved it even if I’d have bought it for myself.

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Once a Spy by Keith Thomson

Once a SpyOnce a Spy by Keith Thomson

My rating: 4 of 5 stars

I came across this thanks to Mystery Scene magazine where I have found many great recommendations.

Imagine a super spy managing to live long enough to develop Alzheimer’s. What happens when he may inadvertently let slip some of the big secrets he knows?

Such is the premise of this really enjoyable book. Drummond Clark is the aging spy in question. His son Charlie is addicted to betting at the track and desperately trying to figure out how he’s going to pay back a Russian mobster when his father turns up missing. All Charlie is trying to do is to return his father home and figure out which assisted living facility would be best, while skimming enough to pay his debts. However, repeated “coincidental” attempts on their lives send them on the lam for a simultaneously humorous and touching attempt to escape.

The scene at the beginning of the book when the father slips his leash of “company” monitors is a great example of the combination of unconscious trained stealth and Alzheimer’s with which Charlie must deal for the remainder of the book. Along the way Charlie and his father spend time together, some lucidly and some not, in a way they never did before … and Charlie discovers that his gambling career and natural talent combine unexpectedly to help keep them alive.

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10 Ways to Refresh Your Blog

1) Make sure there’s a great ‘About You’ page. I’m surprised how many blogs have no info about the author. When I read a great post, I want to know more about you!

2) Use the free Link Within plug-in to make lovely cross-links with the photos and titles of related posts at the end of each of  your posts. I hit one glitch (a link to a post I later discarded) and the Link Within help system fixed it very quickly.

3) Did you know  you could run another blog in your sidebar using a plug-in that allows an RSS feed? (My plug-in came with the free WordPress site.)  On my book review blog I run the newest post from my just-chatting blog, and vice-versa. At Catholics Communicate Christ you’ll see the Guild’s blog in my sidebar. On the site with my speaker information, I run both my own blogs.

Can’t hurt, might help.

4) Get a free ‘Favicon’ plug-in to make your own pic, or the header pic from your blog appear next to your address way up in browser address bars. Just fun, but it also helps readers with multiple tabs open get back to your blog. (The link here is to “All in One Favicon” ….I didn’t get it off their site, but found it from within WordPress browsing a list of plug-ins in the search results for ‘favicon’.)

5) Akismet has cut the impossible amount of spam commentary I was getting to a trickle (Michael Kors bag, or knock-off designer shoes anyone?!?!?). It’s free! I have one code that let me install it on all my blogs; without it my blogging days were over – submerged under comments like, “great blog…must buy shoes to match…keep up good work…you have writing and Louis Vuitton skills…much you say is highly valuable and Gucci also is esteemed!!”

6) Here’s a fun one: Go to Tagxedo.com and submit your blog address to get a word cloud created from all the words contained there. The words are ‘weighted’ by number of times they are used, and it’s an interesting look at what content has the most gravitas on your site. Free!

7) Do a monthly ‘smallify’ (I actually put ‘smallify’ on my calendar!) of the latest posts to make more posts show up on your main page. I click on whatever image I’ve used for each post and cut it to 60%, then interrupt my post early with a ‘read more’ inserted. Now and then I’ve done a quick bit of rewriting to make that teaser on top more interesting. The exercise shows me that my posts need to be better-written in the first place! Now, instead of a new reader landing and seeing one long post, he sees a taste of 5 or 6, with ‘read more’ just a click away.

8) Don’t forget to put the Catholic Writers Guild Shield somewhere on your blog! Right click the one here and ‘save image as’, or ‘snip’ the image from the CWG home page (My daughter discovered the ‘snipping tool’ somewhere in the Microsoft Word bag of tricks…free, of course! I use it all the time now.)

9) While you’re smallifying (yes, if I coin a word I can also run it through its changes!), check posts to see if there are any natural links to old posts you could insert in the text to lead readers deeper into the subject at hand. Or, you might have found some external links you want to include (please be sure these ‘open in new window’ so your readers will be able to get back to  your post easily).

10) It will refresh your own blog to share your responses to the blogs of others! Can we each (I’m guilty of forgetting to do this!!) commit to make one post each month a nod to other bloggers?

Bonus: Do you have social media share buttons on your posts for quick clicking? Do you remember to share your own posts??? Click!

Bonus: Blog followers, don’t forget that Google Reader is going down. Just go to Feedly and let the magic begin….easy, easy transition of your whole RSS subscription list from Google Reader to Feedly, which is lots better and makes you glad GR went under!

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CWG Prayer Chain Post: May 13, 2013

The CWG Prayer Chain Post is a weekly post for members to include their special intentions by adding a comment.

John 16:29-33

His disciples said, ‘Now you are speaking plainly and not using veiled language. Now we see that you know everything and need not wait for questions to be put into words; because of this we believe that you came from God.’ Jesus answered them: ‘Do you believe at last? Listen; the time will come — indeed it has come already — when you are going to be scattered, each going his own way and leaving me alone. And yet I am not alone, because the Father is with me. I have told you all this so that you may find peace in me. In the world you will have hardship, but be courageous: I have conquered the world.’

The power of prayer and the power of people praying.

MAY INTENTION PRAYER 

Mary, Mother of God
O Mary, Mother of God As You are above all creatures in Heaven and Earth, more glorious than the Cherubim, more noble than any here below, Christ has given You to His people, firm bulwark and Protectress, to shield and save sinners who fly unto You. Therefore O Lady, all embracing refuge, we solemnly recall Your sweet protection, and beg Christ forever for His mercy.
Amen

Please leave a comment with your intention. If you have problems adding an intention, email it to Mike Hays at coachhays(at)gmail(dot)com and I will add it.  God bless.

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The “Whole Package” Novel

Are you currently writing a novel? If so, my previous post encourages you to read great books in order to be a better writer.

For me, as a novelist, my goal is to write novels that encompass the “whole package.” So what is the “whole package” in novel writing?

In my opinion, the best novels contain compelling “can’t put it down” unpredictable stories, brilliant character studies, believable dialogue and rich, variant language. The majority of contemporary books are not “whole package “ novels (although there are a few contemporary novels listed below).

Most novels tend to have one or two strengths but may be lacking in other areas. For example, Jodi Picoult’s books have brilliant character studies, narrative voices and crisp writing, but sometimes the stories are lacking. Mary Higgins Clark’s novels have great stories and a crisp writing style, but they’re usually formulaic.

Gone With the Wind by Margaret Mitchell is one of those rare hard-to-find “whole package” novels: (Repeat from a previous post: I own a hard copy but downloaded this on Kindle for 1.99). This has become my favorite book of all time. Mitchell only wrote one novel in her lifetime, but it is the quintessential novel, especially if you enjoy historical romance. This book has it all: excellent, crisp writing, compelling story, intricate, believable and brilliant character studies and, most importantly, it is NOT formulaic. I don’t mind reading formulaic novels, but it’s more enjoyable for me to read a novel with unpredictable stories. The movie is a fair representation of the book, although reading the book offers richer character studies.

Reading and studying “whole package” novels will help novelists improve their writing.

Here are a few other “Whole Package” Novels:

The Time Traveler’s Wife by Audrey Niffenegger (This was also made into a movie, but I highly recommend you read the novel first. The movie is a fair representation of the book and I enjoyed both immensely.)

A High and Hidden Place by Michele Claire Lucas. My review is here. Excellent story, characters, writing.

Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen. Many people don’t appreciate the rich, literary language of the early 19th century, but this is my favorite of Austen’s books. Austen’s books are rich in characterization, complex in storyline and her writing is exquisite. There are quite a few film adaptations; my personal favorite is this one with Keira Knightley.

One of Ours by Willa Cather (my review here)

To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee. Most students will read and study this book at some point in their education. I read it first, in high school, then read it a second time when one of my sons was studying it. Again, Harper Lee only wrote one novel in her career and it was an incredibly moving one with rich characters, excellent dialogue, compelling story.

The Lord of the Rings by J.R.R. Tolkien: (The movie remains fairly faithful to the novels). Rich characters, beautiful writing, compelling story and symbolism all make this a whole package novel.

The Chronicles of Narnia by C. S. Lewis: I read these books out loud years ago to my boys at night before they went to sleep. Highly recommend.

Do you have any favorite novels that encompass great storytelling, rich language, believable characters and unpredictable plot lines? Feel free to comment below!

copyright 2013 Ellen Gable Hrkach

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The Moonstone by Wilkie Collins

The Moonstone by Wilkie Collins

My rating: 5 of 5 stars

I’ve never been that interested in this book or anything by Wilkie Collins for that matter. Collins had that stigma (for me) of having written “classics” and “the first detective novel.” Which just killed any interest I’d ever have had because classics and “first ever” books are musty, boring, and stale, right?

I know that isn’t true, but I still have a hard time shaking that idea.

However, when B.J. Harrison, narrator extraordinaire of The Classic Tales Podcast offered the first five hours of this book as a free sample I couldn’t resist. I soon gave in and ordered the entire books. I was hooked in just a few chapters.

I really didn’t expect Gabriel Betteredge, the first narrator, to be so funny. He spends his spare time reading and rereading Robinson Crusoe which is his ultimate guide to any tricky decision he must make.

The second narrator is equally hilarious, a maiden aunt whose dedication to the Christian cause is such that she spends a considerable amount of time hiding religious tracts in people’s homes to trick them into reading them. I actually laughed out loud at some of the tract names. Now that I think of it, I knew that Collins and Charles Dickens were good friends and I suppose I should have expected a good sense of the ridiculous.

Not every narrator is humorous but the characterization is strong for everyone. Rachel Verinder’s outburst to Franklin Blake toward the end of the book made me applaud her strong common sense while I sympathized with her situation. I was moved to pity by Ezra Jennings’ plight and delighted in Sergeant Cuff’s penchant for roses.

Harrison’s reading emphasized humor without being over the top and pointed out the pathos without being maudlin. His reading was the key to my thorough enjoyment of this Victorian tale complete with a family feud, a cursed diamond, three untrustworthy Indian jugglers, and a small boy nicknamed Gooseberry.

The ending was of its time and incredible by today’s standards, but I was on tenterhooks as each revelation was made. In fact, I put off listening to a brand new book in a series I love so that I could get to the end of this mystery.

Harrison is offering the entire book for $5 which is an amazing bargain. I’m sure how long that offer will stand so if you’re interested check out the link above.

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A closer look at blogging stats and how to improve them

This is the third installment of my Blogging 101 series. I’ll be posting on alternating Wednesdays here and addressing a few different topics:

Today’s topic covers a closer look at stats and how to improve them.

Sometimes, when I get too busy numberizing, I start to wonder if it’s worth it. I mean, why am I here, the small fish in the big pond? That’s its own discussion, really, and I’ve torn into it again and again and again.

So let’s talk stats, despite my reluctance to get all neurotic.

What are stats?

Statistics, including how many people are viewing your site, what posts are most popular, and what color you should wear. There are a variety of different programs and add-ons for this, and we’ll cover stats in more depth in a future post in this series.

SEO refers to search engine optimization, or “how you get people to find you,” although that makes it sound more important than it is. Wait, it IS important. But it can also be distracting. Just like stats.

How can stats help a blogger improve?

They can be a guide of sorts, introducing you to your audience and what they like to read of your writing. You can gain insight into where people are finding your posts and clicking from (i.e., from a link at someone else’s blog or an aggregator site).

They can also show you what topics and posts are popular. You can leverage this information in a number of ways. You can use it to do more of the same or to grow beyond what’s getting attention. You can

They can be misleading. Sometimes, I have a lot of traffic on a post, and I come to find out that I have an image named “mother” during the first week of May and wow, there it is for everyone to find via Google Images. Then again, back when my most popular post of all times was about a huge family tragedy, I took it to mean that people had morbid curiosity and only came to visit my blog because there was blood on the floor, so to speak. (A friend set me straight when I voiced that and said, “Wow, what a caring community that they came and “visited” when you most needed prayer!”)

What are some ways to improve your stats?

Improve your post titles. On the one hand, you’re telling people what to expect. Maybe that means you’re cutesy and clever. Maybe it means you’re straightforward. Maybe it means you’re a mix of everything. (Can you tell I have mixed feelings about this?)

Make sure you are interacting with the readers you already have. Respond to their comments, invite them to leave comments, engage them. If you have people who read and comment via a social network (i.e., Facebook or Twitter), engage. Talk. Share.

Interact elsewhere online, including reading other blogs and commenting. For me, this ALSO means a few of my social networking circles, too. In the last six months alone, this has really changed who’s coming to my blog and how they are responding to me.

Read the blogging blogs and decide for yourself whether to take their advice. Yeah, I have mixed opinions. But I read it, in part because I’m interested and in part because I’m a bloggy-geeky type.

Write for your audience…and for yourself. Guest posting is a way to blog elsewhere and get known (but do it well!). There’s a temptation to turn into “more of the same” and not grow. There’s also a temptation to never pay attention to what resonates. There’s a fine line you walk (or type?) as a blogger…be aware of that

Get known for something, differentiate yourself. Easier said than done, sometimes (often?). I would argue that it takes years, but maybe if you’re focused it doesn’t have to. My experience is that it takes time to get good. You can put those hours in now or over the next few months, years, whatever.

How do you keep your perspective?

Be realistic. Stats are numbers, and numbers are important, to a point. They are useful, to a point. They are a tool to be used, to a point. If you have any sort of tendency toward obsessing or splitting hairs, maybe stats won’t be helpful. (I may or may not be speaking from experience…)

Set goals, have high standards, and don’t settle for less than the best from yourself. I say this at the risk of sounding like I’m in a high school leadership class, I know. Even so, there’s something to be said for living in the present while aiming for the future. Sometimes. :)

Revisit your blogging purposes. They can and do change over time. When you find yourself frustrated with your stats, consider whether it’s time for a change—in scenery, in approach, in something.

Blog traffic is NOT the same as book sales. Since we’re an audience of authors, this is a point you should remember. Blog traffic can help. And being a constant commercial for your book is annoying and won’t help anything.

From the archives:

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Is It Time to Get Back to the No-Nonsense Baltimore Catechism ?

So there I was, listening to the news, wrapping myself around all of this hatred  against Catholics and Christians and not understanding any of it, when I noticed the kitchen faucet was leaking. Ah-ha–a diversion. I go into the garage to get my Allen wrenches (they are those little hex-headed thingies)  so I can remove the faucet handle. As I reach up to get them from the shelf I trip over a large plastic tub and the lid pops off. I look down and what is on top of everything?  Why it is two copies of the old Baltimore Cathechism. One is the “New St. Joseph First Communion Catechism from 1963 and the other is the “New St. Joseph Baltimore Catechism” from 1964. Don’t ever try to tell me God doesn’t have a sense of humor. I started to laugh and I just know that God had nudged  my Guardian Angel who in turn caused me to trip over that plastic tub. (Faith is a beautiful thing, isn’t it?)

To the point: I began to flip through the old Catechisms and I quickly marveled at the simplicity they held within their pages. Who made you?  God made me.—-Did God make all things?  Yes, God made all things.  Of course there is the question most of us older folks remember well: What must you do to be happy with God in heaven?  Answer: To be happy with God in heaven I must know him, love Him, and serve Him in this world.

The last sentence above sums up everything. However, guided by the empowered forces of evil prowling about the world seeking the ruin of souls, many (especially those in the universities teaching our kids)  have decided God is a non-entity. God does not exist for some. Even the President asked for God’s blessings on Planned Parenthood. They perform over three hundred thousand abortions a year and our representative in the White House tells them, “God bless you”. Whatever are these people thinking. It is obvious that we are encapsulated in a relatavistic world where self-gratification rules. And if you stand for God and wish to defend Him and His natural laws you will be ridiculed, mocked and defiled.

The Baltimore Catechism is so simple to understand. I had forgotten  about the beauty  and the purity of it. It may even possess  an innocence and certain naivete.  I tell you this. Children need it. It establishes a foundation. These youngsters will be facing a world that will try to destroy their religious beliefs. This could be  a world that will make it illegal to profess your faith…a world that most of us are just starting to get a glimpse of. A high-school teacher was arrested just the other day for showing a bible in her classroom. Can you imagine 20 years from now.

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